In this activity, we wrote paragraphs using only general words, and then switched off and rewrote each other's paragraphs using specific words. Jennifer rewrote mine.
The lady went through the garden, making movement as people took photos. People tried to stop her path. But no matter their efforts, the lady continued on--that was, until she was stopped by a thing, and fell. The people tried to get her, but she went under them before they could move and began to chew some plants.
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The princess strolled through the garden, stopping as commoners took photos. They tried to stop her. But even though they tried to talk her out of it and even hit her, the princess continued on--that was, until she was accidently knocked into a apple tree, and fell. The commoners tried to carry her away, but she ducked under them before they could reach her and began to chew a few medicine flowers. -posted by Jennifer
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